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               - crispy@crispy-caesus.eu
               <p>
-                Probably my preferred communication medium. At least with
+                Probably my preferred communication medium, at least with
                 <a title="My PGP key" href="static/crispykey.asc">PGP</a>. I
                 really like its decentralized and independent nature. Besides
-                the technical stuff, I just enjoy it over than instant
-                messaging. I prefer writing longer, more thought out messages,
-                instead of a bunch of small talk with no purpose (not that I
-                don't do that, but in hindsight it always seems wasteful)
+                the technical stuff, I just enjoy it more than instant
+                messaging. I prefer writing longer, more infrequent and thought
+                out messages, instead of a bunch of small talk with no purpose
+                (not that I don't do that, but in hindsight it always seems
+                wasteful)
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               - @crispy:crispy-caesus.eu
               <p>
                 Decentralized instant messaging network/protocol which I like
-                for well... instant messaging. While it has spaces it's not
-                really great at managing them, so I can't recommend it for large
-                communities. Thus I mainly use it for DMs and group chats
+                for well... instant messaging. I mainly use it as a quick chat
+                with friends or for small group chats
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