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@@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ Probably my preferred communication medium. At least with
                 <a 
                     title="My PGP key"
                     href="static/crispykey.asc"
-                >PGP</a>
+                >PGP</a>.
                 I really like its decentralized and independent nature. Besides
-                the technical stuff, I just enjoy it more than instant
-                messaging. I prefer writing longer more thought out messages,
-                instead of a bunch of random talk with no purpose (not that I
+                the technical stuff, I just enjoy it over than instant
+                messaging. I prefer writing longer, more thought out messages,
+                instead of a bunch of small talk with no purpose (not that I
                 don't do that, but in hindsight it always seems wasteful).
               </p>
             </li>
@@ -146,8 +146,9 @@ - @crispy:crispy-caesus.eu
               <p>
                 Decentralized instant messaging network/protocol which I like
                 for well... instant messaging. While it has spaces it's not
-                really great for managing them, so I can't recommend it for
-                large communities. Thus I mainly use it for DMs and group chats.
+                really great at managing them, so I can't recommend it for
+                large communities. 
+                Thus I mainly use it for DMs and group chats.
               </p>
             </li>
 
@@ -163,8 +164,9 @@ class="toothbrush-img non-pixelated"
               />
               <p>
                 Over the past months I've created my little legally aquired
-                library of DRM-free music. There are a bunch of reasons why I
-                prefer this way of aquiring music in this way, most of which
+                library of DRM-free music, which I stream through my navidrome
+                instance. There are a bunch of reasons why I
+                prefer this way of aquiring/listening to music, most of which
                 boils down to independence and artist support.
               </p>
             </li>
@@ -173,14 +175,18 @@ </div>
       </main>
       <footer>
         <div class="credits box">
-          <p>art drawn by the amazing</p>
+          <p>
+            Art drawn by the amazing
           <a
             title="VanillaPunkk Instagram"
             href="https://www.instagram.com/vannillapunkk/"
             target="_blank"
             rel="noopener nofererrer"
             >VanillaPunkk</a
-          >
+            >
+             | 
+            Thanks to some friends for helping with the CSS
+          </p>
         </div>
       </footer>
     </div>